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Post by Metal Matt on Aug 30, 2014 20:49:28 GMT -6
So after running out of story ideas, I came up with a story idea. And it involves us returning to the events of Metal Matt's Bride Of Chucky. In this one, 16 years after their infamous spree throughout Detroit, Metal Matt, Chucky, and Tiffany return to Detroit, with the goal being for Chucky and Tiffany to again attempt to transfer their souls into Jesse and Jade, who are no longer teenagers, now older and wiser. But can Metal Matt, Chucky, and Tiffany succeed?
ACT I, PART I:
METAL MATT is driving to Detroit as Romeo Void's "Never Say Never" comes on the radio:
METAL MATT: God, I LOVE THIS SONG!
CHUCKY: Yeah, you love those 80s tunes, don't you?
METAL MATT: Who doesn't?
CHUCKY: New Wave isn't really my thing, though.
METAL MATT: Come on, man, open up some. My name's Metal Matt, yet my musical taste is quite eclectic.
TIFFANY: Yeah, that's true.
METAL MATT: Anyway, we're almost there. We can stay in our old trailer. If it's still there, that is.
CHUCKY: Why wouldn't it be there?
METAL MATT: Well, you know how Detroit is. Especially where we lived.
CHUCKY: Oh yeah.
TIFFANY: I can't wait. This is gonna be so much fun!
METAL MATT: All right, well, we're here.
The three exit the car and enter their old trailer. They enter to find that virtually nothing has changed.
METAL MATT: Well, I'll be a cat's pajamas. It's exactly as we left it!
TIFFANY: That is quite amazing. All my dolls are still here!
CHUCKY: And there's that weird net thing above the bed.
METAL MATT: And there's the bathroom.
TIFFANY: This is quite amazing.
CHUCKY: Well, don't get too excited.
METAL MATT: Why? Tell us why we shouldn't get too excited.
CHUCKY: We're here on a mission, remember?
METAL MATT: No, I said we were just going to visit Detroit for a couple of days.
CHUCKY: Well, I apparently have different plans than you, I guess. You see, 16 years ago, we tried to do something and failed. Now, we're going to try it again.
METAL MATT: What do you mean?
CHUCKY: What I mean, is that we are going to try and transfer our souls into Jesse and Jade.
TIFFANY: Wow!
METAL MATT: What?
CHUCKY: You don't like it?
METAL MATT: No I don't!
CHUCKY: Why? Tell me why this sounds like a bad idea.
METAL MATT: Well, first of all, I remember it going so well the first time 16 years ago. Plus, you don't even know if they still live in Detroit. Hell, they could be dead for all we know! How did you come up with this plan? Were you high? Were you smoking a coconut?
CHUCKY: Dude, believe me. This time we will not fail.
METAL MATT: Well, I'll take your word for it. And I'll tag along, just so I can see it blow up in your face once again.
TIFFANY: Well, he used to live next door to us, let's see if they still live there.
CHUCKY: Well, we would have to send Metal Matt. He's remained friendly with them.
METAL MATT: Well, I've lost contact with them, but I suppose we can give it a try.
The three break into JESSE's old trailer, only to find it empty.
METAL MATT: Well, that's just fantastic. Some idea you have, Chucky.
CHUCKY: This doesn't make sense. I thought you said he lives here, Tiffany.
TIFFANY: He must have moved, I guess.
CHUCKY: Well, do either of you have any idea where he could possibly be living now?
METAL MATT: Have no idea.
TIFFANY: Yeah, I don't know.
METAL MATT: Wait a minute. Remember when we were in his van and we incapacitated that police chief?
CHUCKY: Yeah.
TIFFANY: How could we forget? That was awesome.
CHUCKY: Why do you ask?
METAL MATT: Because I think I know where he's living now. And I think we can kill two birds with one stone...
ACT I, PART II coming soon...
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Post by Spanky on Aug 30, 2014 21:16:23 GMT -6
Very interesting Duderino, looking forward to seeing how this pans out.
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Post by Gee on Aug 30, 2014 21:33:11 GMT -6
Yeah man, gave this a read. I like it! Can't wait to see what you make out of this
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Post by Metal Matt on Aug 30, 2014 21:34:29 GMT -6
Yeah, I'm really excited to write some more!  |
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 30, 2014 21:59:01 GMT -6
Great job man, Pretty Awesome!
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Post by smngry on Aug 31, 2014 1:36:45 GMT -6
Nice man, very entertaining
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Post by Metal Matt on Sept 1, 2014 0:28:06 GMT -6
ACT I, PART II:
We cut to a mansion. JESSE and JADE are snuggling on a couch, watching The Runaways. They are also eating popcorn.
JADE: Oh, I just love this movie, Jesse, don't you?
JESSE: Yeah, it's pretty good.
JADE: You know, the other night, I was just thinking.
JESSE: Of what?
JADE: About how long we've been married. We've been married for 16 years. We should celebrate it somehow.
JESSE: How?
JADE: Well, what's one place we've never been to?
JESSE: Well, France would be really cool. But it's such a cliche romantic place.
JADE: True. How about Italy?
JESSE: That sounds interesting.
JADE: Well, that settles it then. Tomorrow, we pack and head to Italy for a week.
JESSE: Really? Are you sure you want to do that so quickly?
JADE: Jesse, look at how long we've been married. We deserve a little time for ourselves.
JESSE: Well, I suppose I can let my boss know I'm taking a week off.
Outside their house, METAL MATT, CHUCKY, and TIFFANY arrive.
METAL MAT: Yep, this is definitely the place. I have fond memories of us killing that cop here. I guess that's what he gets for snooping in our business.
CHUCKY: It looks familiar.
TIFFANY: How are we going to get in?
METAL MATT: It's simple, we just sneak in through the back door. We just have to be real quiet about this. Stealth attack as it were.
CHUCKY: Alright, let's go.
The two go around the house to the back door. It is locked.
METAL MATT: Well, we need to use one of our knives to unlock this door.
TIFFANY: Use mine.
METAL MATT is handed TIFFANY's knife. He uses this knife to cut the lock and opens the door slowly.
METAL MATT: [softly] Alright, we're in. Now where could they be?
TIFFANY: It's a giant house, they could be anywhere.
METAL MATT: ALright, Chucky, you check the kitchen, Tiffany, you check the bedrooms, and I'll go search the rest of the house.
The three split up to find JESSE and JADE.
Meanwhile, JADE seems to hear something.
JADE: Did you hear something?
JESSE: What?
JADE: I could have sworn I heard something, like a door being shut.
JESSE: It must have just been the movie.
JADE: Yeah, I guess so.
The three meet up in the kitchen.
CHUCKY: No luck in here.
TIFFANY: There's also no one in the bedrooms. Did you find them anywhere?
METAL MATT: Well, I've found them in the living room. We're going to kill them together.
CHUCKY: Did you find anyone else?
METAL MATT: Well, outside I found a gardener and inside I found a maid. But me and Tiffany took care of them. So no one will be able to save them.
The three move into the living room slowly.
METAL MATT: [softly] Alright, in 3... 2... 1.... Now.
CHUCKY: Well, if it isn't the two lovebirds.
TIFFANY: Very sorry, but the honeymoon's over.
JESSE and JADE scream. CHUCKY throws his knife at the two, but they dodge it and run to another side of the house.
JESSE: We need to warn Jane!
They come across JANE, their maid. Her back is to the two.
JADE: Oh, Jane, thank god you're here. We have to get out of here! Come on!
JANE turns around to reveal that her eyes have been gouged out, with two bloody eye holes. Her ribcage is also exposed, with two bones sticking out in an unnatural way and another two broken in half. Her throat is also slit. She falls onto JESSE and JADE, dead.
JADE screams.
JESSE: Come on, we need to get out of here! We need to warn Fred! Hopefully those three haven't gotten to him.
The two run outside to warn FRED, their gardener.
JADE: Fred!
FRED turns around to reveal that he has been impaled with his hedge trimmers. His tongue has been cut out and his arms has been broken in half, with the bones exposed. His throat is slit, and his body has been cut in half starting at the waist. His brain is also exposed, with his head being covered in blood.
JESSE: We gotta get out of here!
The two get in a car. Though it struggles for a while, the car finally starts, and the two drive off.
METAL MATT: They aren't getting away that easily.
CHUCKY: Let's get in the car and go after them.
The three get in the car and drive after JESSE and JADE.
ACT II, PART I coming soon...
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Post by Spanky on Sept 1, 2014 5:04:12 GMT -6
Nice man, I am digging it.
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Post by Metal Matt on Sept 1, 2014 21:29:39 GMT -6
ACT II, PART I:
JESSE and JADE are driving on the highway as METAL MATT, CHUCKY, and TIFFANY are close behind them.
JADE: Why are they after us?
JESSE: I don't know.
JADE: Why is this happening to us?
JESSE: We're just unlucky, I guess.
JADE: Jesse, I'm scared.
JESSE: Don't be, we will be safe soon enough.
JADE: I just wish we knew a reason why they're back.
JESSE: I've been trying t-
JADE: Jesse, we're entering a freeway!
JESSE accidentally drives into a freeway, nearly running over several pedestrians. METAL MATT follows, this time running over several pedestrians. The pedestrians' organs fly out of their bodies, with one's head coming clean off. METAL MATT then runs over a man in his late twenties, as he runs over his leg several times, with the leg muscles slowly and painfully tearing off the bone. METAL MATT then runs over the man's head, with it popping like a balloon.
METAL MATT: Meh. Accidents happen.
METAL MATT edges JESSE and JADE's car.
JADE: JESSE! DRIVE FASTER!
JESSE: I'm driving as fast as I can!
METAL MATT continues to bump into JESSE and JADE's car. JESSE and JADE are able to get away. METAL MATT crashes into a car and flips over. The car has been smashed to pieces.
CHUCKY: Nice driving, man.
METAL MATT: Shut the hell up. We need to find something else, fast.
TIFFANY: Metal Matt, I found something.
TIFFANY finds another car in the parking lot of the Gasworks.
METAL MATT: Perfect. Everybody get in.
The three get in the car.
METAL MATT: Everybody, search inside the car, and see if you find anything useful.
TIFFANY: I've found a couple of guns.
METAL MATT: Nice! We can use those.
CHUCKY: I found some things.
METAL MATT: Like what?
CHUCKY: Only a couple of switchblade knives.
METAL MATT: Awesome. These ought to come in handy.
CHUCKY: We better get going quick.
METAL MATT: Not so fast. A surprise onslaught is what will happen.
CHUCKY: Are you crazy? They're going to get away!
METAL MATT: Chucky, listen to yourself. You need to get with the times. A slow and painful death, is what will seal the deal.
TIFFANY: Metal Matt is right. Slow and painful deaths are sometimes the best.
METAL MATT: Alright, we go now.
CHUCKY: Question, where are we going?
METAL MATT: I'll do you one better. I'll tell you where we're going.
TIFFANY: Where?
METAL MATT: The graveyard.
Meanwhile, JESSE and JADE are several miles away from the graveyard. They pull their car over to the side of the road to take a breather.
JADE: Are we safe now, Jesse?
JESSE: For now.
JADE: What are we going to do?
JESSE: We're going to have to go to another state. Don't worry Jade. I'll figure it all out. You-
Suddenly, their car is flipped over by METAL MATT. Their car flips over several times, cutting both JESSE and JADE's faces. A cut has opened up on JADE's arm, with her inner arm tissue exposed. The car explodes, setting JESSE on fire. He is burned to a crisp, starting with his hair. It falls to the ground. His skin becomes a charred black and his eyes are bloodshot, with his bones in his hand now visible. He is gasping for oxygen, but dies shortly after. JADE runs for help, as METAL MATT, CHUCKY, and TIFFANY go right after her...
The end is near. ACT II, PART II coming soon...
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Post by Spanky on Sept 2, 2014 3:24:00 GMT -6
Nice dude, very descriptive.
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Post by Metal Matt on Sept 2, 2014 8:23:53 GMT -6
Yeah, I'm trying to make the deaths in this story more graphic and brutal.  |
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Post by Metal Matt on Sept 3, 2014 1:30:42 GMT -6
ACT II, PART II:
JADE makes her way to the graveyard.
JADE: I have to hide somewhere.
JADE searches the graveyard for a coffin to hide in, to no avail. Finally, she finds a coffin. She opens it to reveal CHUCKY's human corpse, its head still separated from its neck. Worms and maggots are crawling out the eye holes. JADE is disgusted, but hears the footsteps of METAL MATT, CHUCKY, and TIFFANY, and hurries and throws CHUCKY's human corpse out and crawls in the coffin and closes the door. METAL MATT, CHUCKY, and TIFFANY arrive at the graveyard.
CHUCKY: So Metal Matt, I have a question for you.
METAL MATT: Yes?
CHUCKY: HOW AM I GOING TO GET MY BODY NOW?
METAL MATT: Well, with that attitude, you're not getting anything.
CHUCKY: Well, I'm sorry, but I need a body to transfer my soul into.
METAL MATT: Dude, we're in a graveyard. You have plenty to choose from.
CHUCKY: Dead people?
TIFFANY: Is there something wrong with that?
CHUCKY: The chant probably won't work with dead people!
METAL MATT: Then you clearly haven't studied your Damballa Voodoo very well.
CHUCKY: What do you mean?
METAL MATT: The Damballa Chant works with both non-animated and alive figures. You can do it with either. The soul goes to the afterlife after they die, leaving it free for whoever says the Damballa Chant.
TIFFANY: Yeah, that's right.
CHUCKY: Well, I didn't know that.
METAL MATT: Idiot.
They search for JADE.
TIFFANY: She's got to be around here somewhere.
METAL MATT: She's hiding somewhere.
JADE finds a knife inside the coffin.
CHUCKY: Everybody search every coffin in here. There's some shovels, start digging.
Suddenly, JADE jumps out of the coffin and stabs CHUCKY. TIFFANY then goes after her. They fight for a while.
CHUCKY: Come on, Metal Matt, pull this knife out of me.
METAL MATT: Why would I do that?
CHUCKY: I don't have time for this! Just pull it out!
METAL MATT: Fine.
METAL MATT pulls the knife out.
CHUCKY: There. Was that so hard?
METAL MATT stabs CHUCKY with the knife. CHUCKY screams in pain.
CHUCKY: Why? You said you were going to get me a body.
METAL MATT: Well, spoiler alert: I lied. I'll get Tiffany a body, but not you.
METAL MATT attacks CHUCKY for a while, chopping off CHUCKY's hand. It gets cut, and METAL MATT pulls the hand out of its socket, tearing the rubber off. METAL MATT then grabs CHUCKY'S jaw and slowly tears it off, with several of CHUCKY'S teeth violently being pulled out along with the jaw. His jaw bone is broken in half, with the left lower jaw bone sticking out in an unnatural way. CHUCKY's mouth is covered in blood. METAL MATT then impales CHUCKY through his mouth and through his throat, leaving a circle-sized hole in the back of CHUCKY'S neck.
METAL MATT: Chucky, I should have done this a long time ago...
CHUCKY weakly looks at METAL MATT, for the last time.
METAL MATT: Go to Hell.
METAL MATT fatally stabs Chucky in the chest, and sets CHUCKY on fire, burning him to a crisp, in a similar manner to JESSE, with CHUCKY's eyes becoming bloodshot, and his hair falling out. CHUCKY is then chopped up into tiny pieces, and is set on fire once again by METAL MAT, permanently destroying CHUCKY.
Meanwhile, TIFFANY and JADE are still fighting. JADE is then stabbed in the shoulder by TIFFANY. TIFFANY then says the chant, successfully transferring her soul into JADE. "JADE's" injuries supernaturally heal.
METAL MATT: So, did it work?
TIFFANY'S soul is now in JADE's body, and is completely healthy.
TIFFANY: Yes, and it feels so good.
METAL MATT: So, I guess this is it?
TIFFANY: Well, it doesn't have to be. It's the end of an adventure, no doubt. But there's no reason we can't still be friends like we used to. By the way, I loved what you did to Chucky. Now he can't bother anyone anymore.
METAL MATT: Yeah, that's true. I have to admit, I'll miss those days. But it's the start of a new adventure. And Chucky deserved what he got. He was no friend of ours.
TIFFANY: So, can we go home and you, Jennifer, and me all hang out?
METAL MATT: That would be awesome.
The End.
So this was really fun to write and I thought it came out really well. I might take a break from writing, as I'm pretty much out of ideas. If any ideas do come to me in the future, I'll be sure to write it. I will return to writing in the near future, as I love writing. But for right now, I think I'll take a short break. And of course, I'll consider any suggestions. Hope you enjoyed, and thanks for reading!
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Post by Spanky on Sept 3, 2014 3:40:31 GMT -6
Good job man, very entertaining.
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