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Post by Zephyr on Aug 16, 2014 22:01:52 GMT -6
I am here with my 3rd fan fic! It will be about The Doctor and some bad things are starting to happen.
So here we go....
Part 1
THE DOCTOR: Hey METAL MATT!
METAL MATT: Whats up? I brought the Metal Army.
THE DOCTOR: Why?
METAL MATT: To take them to there grave.
THE DOCTOR looks up at the buss and can see the Metal Army hanging out the window and can see there rotton boddies. He looks at METAL MATT and can see him rottoning as well. He heres a voice that says "Your next"!
THE DOCTOR: Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
He is in bed.
THE DOCTOR: These nightmares are getting worse and worse. I am going to call METAL MATT.
METAL MATT: Hello?
THE DOCTOR: Hey, can you and the Metal Army come over? We have to talk.
METAL MATT: Is somthing wrong?
THE DOCTOR: Well....Yeah.... I have been having some nightmares.And they are getting worse and worse. Can yall come over?
METAL MATT: Of course!
10 minutes later...
THE DOCTOR: Thank yall for comming over. I can always count on all of you.
GEE: Your welcome!
METAL MATT: So what kind of nightmares have you been having?
THE DOCTOR: Well... It is not the nightmares. But they seem like they are comming in real life.
SPANKY: Like how?
THE DOCTOR: I here foot-steps walking back and forth upstairs. And when I go to bed, I here something softly knocking on the closet door. I noticed the knock is getting louder and louder every night.
CHUCKY115AWESOME: Crap, that would scare me half to death.
METAL MATT: I think we need to call Elise. She studies paranormal activiti and can get rid of those things.
THE DOCTOR: Sounds great!
Part 2 comming soon.....
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Post by Metal Matt on Aug 16, 2014 22:02:54 GMT -6
Interesting Fan Fic. Looking forward to more.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2014 22:14:45 GMT -6
That's a very good start... and thank you for making me into a fanfic.
I am guessing that The Metal Army is trapped in an alternate universe... the one place my TARDIS can't go... but I was given permission by The Shadow Proclamation to be granted access because the Metal Army is trapped in a Dead Zone Galaxy and it is forbidding anomaly that can tear the very fabric of reality. So now it is up to me to find the origins of where they were taken out of our universe from so I can triangulate the exact position on the rift of time and space to get The Metal Army back in the realms of our universe, our reality therefore saving them as well as the entire universe in the process.
I sense that some how the Weeping Angles are behind this. What I do not know is how they conjured up enough time energy to displace The Metal Army to not only a different time... but a different place that isn't even our own universe or reality. That kind of energy would create a black hole in our universe in a place that doesn't belong. I better go find it and start there. I have lot's of work to do.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 16, 2014 22:21:37 GMT -6
Daja Vu
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Post by Deleted on Aug 16, 2014 22:25:12 GMT -6
I have a TARDIS. I bounced back a few minutes, copied my original post...jupped forward to now, then pasted it here.  |
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Post by Spanky on Aug 17, 2014 5:56:30 GMT -6
Metal Army will be fine and dandy as usual with the #RibcageShirt showing us the way.
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Post by chucky115awesome on Aug 17, 2014 9:26:56 GMT -6
Great stuff man
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 17, 2014 10:04:09 GMT -6
Thanks, I am trying to figure out what to write for part 2!
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 21, 2014 20:47:37 GMT -6
Part 2
UNDEADPUNK: I just got off the phone with Elise. She said she will be comming over tonight.
GEE: Great.
Later that night, ELISE arrives at the house.
THE DOCTOR: Thank you so much for comming over.
ELISE: No, thank you for having me here. Your friends told me what is happening.
THE DOCTOR: Yes, it has been some tough nights.
ELISE: I would like to get started right away.
THE DOCTOR: Sure!
ELISE: Everyone hold hands. And form a circle.
THE DOCTOR: Now what?
ELISE: I want everyone to close there eyes and focus on the sound of the metronome. And feel yourselves shifting to the darkness and getting sleepier and sleepier and sleepier.....
CHUCKY115AWESOME: Were are we?
ELISE: All I know is that it is some place between hell and earth.
SPANKY: I can see myself sleeping!
ELISE: Yes. It is hard to explain. So where did you say the knocking was comming from at night?
THE DOCTOR: My closet door.
They all go to THE DOCTOR'S bedroom. ELISE opens up the closet door.
UNDEADPUNK: Oh my .....
GEE: What is that terrible smell?
They walk through the cloths and in a room.
SPANKY: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
METAL MATT: What?
SPANKY: Who is laying on the floor in a pool of blood?
METAL MATT: It looks like...... DRAGON D4'S brother!
Everyone hears a laugh comming from the door on the other side of the room.
UNDEADPUNK: We need to get out of here before this thing kills us.
ELISE: No we have to destroy this parasite.
METAL MATT: We will stick together. We are The Metal Army!
ELISE: Come on!
ELISE opens the door and a boddie comes out.
ELISE: Sarhra!!!
METAL MATT: Her daughter!
ELISE: [crying] Who are you!!!
DEMON: The Metal army has no power here. This will be your last time living.
THE DOCTOR: What do you want from me?
DEMON: I am slowly pushing your soul out your boddie. And when I have life and connection with life again, I will kill all of you. And get you all will rot here just like my brother is.
Everyone looks at the dead corpse. They look back up and see the figure revealing from the darkness.
METAL MATT: DRAGON D4.
DRAGON D4: Time to die.
The whole army is somehow thrown aginst the wall. Suddenly, everyone wakes back up.
GEE: That was insane.
ELISE: Is every one here?
CHUCKY115AWESOME: Where is THE DOCTOR?
The scene cuts to the place in the darkness and reveals THE DOCTOR yelling in pain chained to the wall.
THE DOCTOR: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Part 3 comming soon........
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 22, 2014 20:20:04 GMT -6
I am going to add more to Part 2.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 23, 2014 8:19:13 GMT -6
Just added to part 2! Check it out!
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Post by Spanky on Aug 23, 2014 8:27:10 GMT -6
Very interesting man.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 23, 2014 21:32:03 GMT -6
Part 3
METAL MATT: We need to to get him back to the real world.
GEE: I have a plan!
In the dark world, THE DOCTOR and DRAGON D4 are talking.
THE DOCTOR: Why are you doing this? Just leave us alone.
DRAGON D4: [Looking at the reflection of his knife, speaking calmly] I did not want this, I want everything to be the way it was suppose to. I want to be with my brother. I want to...... see him again.
Instead I have to see him dead. Do you know how it feels, to loose somone you had a actual connection with?
THE DOCTOR: I have.
DRAGON D4: When I saw my brother killed. In warm blood, I did not want to live. His last words to me was to kill the people who killed him. Then he died. I miss him, I would give anything to see him again. The only thing I have to live for is the promise I made to him. I have to kill all of you. I made the promise.
THE DOCTOR: You do not have to do any of this. I have lots of things I lost. People, people who meant the world to me. Your brother does not want you to be here. And I know that.
A tear comes from DRAGON D4'S eye.
THE DOCTOR: You do have something to live for. You are not to far gone. You cant be.
DRAGON D4: [Looks at the remains of his brother] I.......... will join the Metal Army again.
DRAGON D4 takes the chains off of THE DOCTOR.
THE DOCTOR: Come on lets get out of here.
DRAGON D4: Right!
They both walk out the door. THE DOCTOR wakes up.
METAL MAT: Your back!
GEE: Is DRAGON D4 destroyed?
THE DOCTOR: We worked things out.
SPANKY: What do you mean?
DRAGON D4 walks down the stairs.
DRAGON D4: Thank you THE DOCTOR. I realize where I belong. With the Metal Army.
THE DOCTOR: He is not lieing.
METAL MATT: Welcome back friend!
The End!
This was a great Fan Fic to write. I feel like I needed to get back with the Metal Army. This was my final Fan Fic! Hope all of you enjoyed. And thank you, The Metal Army. And a special thanks to, The Doctor!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2014 9:28:09 GMT -6
Not bad... not bad at all. So I am guessing that I am an outside friend of The Metal Army. Kinda like what Masked Rider was to the Power Rangers, what Casey Jones is to the Ninja Turtles, or what Gizmo Duck was to the rest of the Duck Tales crew. Or what Batman is to the Justice League.  Cool... I'll be that guy. |
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 24, 2014 9:32:33 GMT -6
Yeah, pretty much.
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