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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 27, 2014 0:22:08 GMT -6
Well, this is my 13th fanfic! Hard to believe I've written this many. My Bride Of Chucky one is still my favorite.  This one is a back story for Dragon D4. Thanks for the suggestion, brother. Turns out, Dragon's murderous tendencies started way before his betrayal of the Metal Army... Dragon's Past By Metal Matt Idea suggested by Dragon D4 ACT I, PART I: The night is here. A full moon is out. A man is seen shopping at a jewelry store. MAN: Thank you. Jackie is going to love this. CASHIER: Thank you. Visit us again sometime. The woman starts to walk down the street, which is dark and empty. She calls someone on her cell phone. A figure, dressed in a trenchcoat, watches from the back of an abandoned building. MAN: Hello, Jackie? Yeah, I'm going to be a little late coming to the party. I just got sidetracked. I'll still be there. It just might take me some extra time. OK, just come pick me up at my house. You too, baby. Bye. [hangs up] The woman senses something is wrong. WOMAN: Hello? Is anyone here? Jackie, is that you? The figure quickly moves away from the building. WOMAN: Come on, Jackie, this isn't funny anymore! What's going on?? FIGURE: Just this. The figure assaults the man with a baseball bat. He continues to assault the MAN with a baseball bat, leaving him bloodied and near death. FIGURE: You know, I've been looking for revenge. And you're going to tell me the whereabouts of one Metal Matt. MAN: [groggy] I... don't know... who that is. I don't even know... who you are... FIGURE: Excuse me. My name is Dragon. Metal Matt killed my brother, also named Dragon 20 years ago. I was close to my brother. You know what it's like to be close to someone, and have them taken away from you? MAN: Why are you doing this? DRAGON: That's a good question... ACT I, PART II coming soon... (And be sure to check out the finale to Double Vision!) |
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Post by Spanky on Jul 27, 2014 3:56:02 GMT -6
Hmmm very interesting dude. I look forward to seeing this play out.
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Post by Gee on Jul 27, 2014 5:31:34 GMT -6
Good job yet again, man! Looking forward to seeing how this all pans out
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Post by chucky115awesome on Jul 27, 2014 8:48:11 GMT -6
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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 27, 2014 8:53:17 GMT -6
Part 2 will be coming... Tonight... |
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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 27, 2014 22:58:53 GMT -6
ACT I, PART II:
DRAGON D4: You know, I had an interesting childhood. I grew up in a suburban town. It was quiet. Not a lot happened. It was my parents and me, my brother Dragon, and my sister, Tori. My parents worked part time, and my brother was old enough to take care of us. So for the morning and the afternoon, Dragon would watch me and Tori. Dragon didn't do much. He just sat around and watched TV. Me and Tori just did our own thing. But one day, me and Tori decided to play a game. A fun game, we wanted to be. But unfortunately, much like everything in life does, it didn't go as planned.
TORI: Let's play a game!
YOUNG DRAGON D4: What kind of game?
TORI: A fun one! We need to be creative!
YOUNG DRAGON D4: How about Kitchen?
TORI: No, that's too boring! Come on, we need to think of something, it's almost lunchtime, and you know how hungry and cranky I can get!
YOUNG DRAGON D4: I don't know... How about... Barber?
TORI: Nice idea!
TORI gets the scissors. DRAGON walks into the room.
DRAGON: What are you doing?
TORI: We're playing barber! Wanna play with us?
DRAGON: No, I've got more important things to do. Like watch Perfect Strangers and not act like an idiot. Have fun... I guess.
TORI: You do it first.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: I like my hair long. I could never part with it.
TORI: OK, I can cut my hair. Oh, it's lunchtime! Can you go cook us some lunch?
YOUNG DRAGON D4: I'll be right back. Chicken nuggets?
TORI: Right.
YOUNG DRAGON D4 gets a bag of chicken nuggets from out the freezer. He cooks the chicken nuggets. As he sets the plates down on the table, he hears a scream. He and DRAGON run into the room and see TORI, lying dead on the ground, her head bloodied.
DRAGON: What happened?
YOUNG DRAGON D4: I don't know, we were playing barber and I was cooking lunch! She must have accidentally stabbed herself.
DRAGON: Well, this is unfortunate. Mom and Dad can't ever know about this. You won't tell them a thing, will you?
YOUNG DRAGON D4: No, no I won't!
DRAGON: That's what I thought. Let's keep this our little secret.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: Yeah... Our little secret...
DRAGON D4: Secretly, I liked the sight of someone in a pool of their own blood. I particularly didn't like the fact it was my sister, as I loved her, but the fact of the matter was that I was now obsessed with death. I knew Dragon was a killer. He would always brag to me about killing someone, and would describe his kills in great details. And after one day, the day after Tori's death, he killed some gang member. Finally, I was curious, and decided to ask him if I could join him as his partner in crime.
ACT II, PART I coming soon...
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Post by chucky115awesome on Jul 28, 2014 7:43:29 GMT -6
Keep going |
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Post by Spanky on Jul 28, 2014 8:36:38 GMT -6
Nice dude, I am liking it.
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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 28, 2014 22:46:46 GMT -6
ACT II, PART I:
DRAGON D4: Dragon was really curious as to why I wanted to join him on his killing sprees all of a sudden. But he was building up a gang, so he thought the more people in, the better. Can't say I blame him. Nevertheless, he brought me to the hangout, The Gasworks, to meet the other gang members.
DRAGON: I have a feeling you're going to like these guys, man. They're super cool.
The two walk into the Gasworks. It is mostly empty with the exception of a couple people. METAL MATT is seen at the bar, drinking red Kool-Aid. The two walk upstairs to visit the gang members.
DRAGON: Knock knock!
The Experience Gang are seen sitting around a table.
MONSTER: Well, it's about time you got here. You're 20 minutes late. Who's the little squirt?
DRAGON: Easy, man. He's cool. He's my little brother. His name is also Dragon. Dragon D4 to be exact.
CAGE: Why did you bring him here?
DRAGON: He wants to join our gang.
MONSTER: Um, what?
ZOMBIE: We would look pretty weird having a kid in the gang.
DRAGON: He's not that young. Besides, he's a killer. Big time.
WOLFE: Really? What's his record?
DRAGON: Well, he's still a little bit new, but I've been teaching him. He killed his own little sister, with scissors.
MONSTER: Wow.
MOOSE: That's impressive.
WOLFE: Did he really?
DRAGON: He did! He'll tell you himself! Didn't you kill her?
DRAGON D4: What I wanted to say was no. I wanted to tell the truth. But then I figured, the truth was overrated. And I wanted to get in the gang. All of them seemed like the coolest guys in the world. So I then told a lie. And it would change my life forever.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: Yeah, I sure did. The blood was all over the floor. It gave me an adrenaline rush like you wouldn't believe.
MONSTER: Now that's a killing machine. You're in, kid.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: Awesome! I won't let you down. Mr...
MONSTER: Monster. And this is Wolfe, Moose, and Cage.
CAGE: Yeah, if you ever have a problem, just come to us, and we'll take care of it.
MONSTER: But we have to test you first. To make sure you're truly worthy. [calls downstairs] We need some refills of our beers. Can you send a waitress up here?
DRAGON hands YOUNG DRAGON D4 a switchblade.
DRAGON: Make us proud, little bro.
The waitress comes upstairs. YOUNG DRAGON D4 slits her throat and kills her.
DRAGON D4: And that was my first kill. And it felt great.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: That felt great.
The entire gang applauds.
MONSTER: I think you're going to fit in just fine, kid.
The phone rings.
MONSTER: Hello? Yeah. Well, that sounds dangerous. Don't worry. We'll be on it. Yeah, no problem. OK, bye. Well, it's time to go.
WOLFE: What's the problem?
MONSTER: You know Christine? Well, her old boyfriend might try and kill her. She doesn't know if he knows about her new boyfriend, as she and this guy haven't officially broke up yet. But she doesn't feel safe, so she's asking us to go to her house to make sure no harm comes to it.
CAGE: What's the name of the old boyfriend?
MONSTER: Someone named... Metal Matt.
The End is near. ACT II, PART II coming soon...
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Post by smngry on Jul 29, 2014 1:40:38 GMT -6
I'm enjoying this cool little universe you've created for these characters. Everything ties in neatly, the prequels lead into the later entries great.
Well done Matt
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Post by Spanky on Jul 29, 2014 8:14:01 GMT -6
DUN DUN DUN
Very good Metal Matt, I enjoyed it.
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Post by Gee on Jul 29, 2014 19:08:58 GMT -6
This is pretty great Metal Matt, wouldn't expect anything less
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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 29, 2014 19:13:56 GMT -6
Yeah, thanks everybody! When I first started writing these, I wanted them to take place in a very great universe. I was inspired by the Simpsons, The Crow, and of course the Chucky series (Particularly Bride), and I initially considered it taking place in a fictional town, rather than Detroit, and having it be dark 24/7. No sunlight, just darkness all the time. But I couldn't come up with a good fictional name for the town, so I just decided to have it take place in Detroit, lol. But thanks for reading everybody. When I first started writing these, I never imagined it would take on a life of its own. It's been amazing to write these, and it makes it even better to hear your responses, because I write for you, and I love all your responses, and I will keep on writing stuff like this, because it's what I love to do!  |
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Post by Spanky on Jul 29, 2014 19:16:24 GMT -6
Hope you do bro, hope you do.
And Detroit is scary enough a place as it is. Bringing Chucky there kind of calms it down a bit.
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Post by Metal Matt on Jul 29, 2014 23:50:41 GMT -6
ACT II, PART II:
DRAGON: So, Little Dragon, this is your first mission. Don't screw it up.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: Don't worry. I won't let you guys down!
CAGE: Good, kid. That's what we like to hear.
WOLFE: So where is this house, anyway?
MONSTER: We should be almost there. It's on the bad side of Detroit.
ZOMBIE: Aren't all the sides of Detroit bad?
MONSTER: Shut the hell up, Zombie. We're almost there.
The car arrives at CHRISTINA'S house.
MONSTER: Alright, let's quietly sneak in. The old boyfriend must be here. Look at that motorcycle. He's gotta be here.
WOLFE: Nice model.
DRAGON: Hey! Hey! Focus!
The gang sneaks inside the house. They hear CHRISTINA and METAL MATT talking.
CHRISTINA: Sure, we're good. Actually, you can help me babysit a kid in a couple of days. The name's Andy. My friend Maggie was supposed to watch him, but she has to work. Is that fine?
METAL MATT: Alright then.
TIFFANY slits CHRISTINA'S throat.
MONSTER: [softly] Whoa. That's not good.
ZOMBIE: Nice techniques they're using. Maybe we can learn a few things.
MONSTER: [softly] Not so loud, man! You wanna blow our cover?
METAL MATT: I guess cheaters never prosper, now do they?
DRAGON: OK, on three. 1,2...
METAL MATT: OK, I'd say that was a success.
DRAGON: 3!
Suddenly, a group of thugs enter the room and attack the three. CHARLES and TIFFANY are able to escape, but METAL MATT is overpowered by the thugs. METAL MATT is able to stab two of them in the heart. The other three throw METAL MATT through a window. METAL MATT is dead on impact.
DRAGON D4: Mission accomplished!
DRAGON: Yeah, we all did nice work.
MONSTER: You guys alright?
WOLFE: Yeah, we're fine.
ZOMBIE: Let's get back to the Gasworks before anyone sees us. The last thing we need is to get arrested.
CAGE: Yeah, let's go.
The gang sneak into the car and drive off while CHARLES and TIFFANY look over METAL MATT's corpse.
DRAGON D4: At that point, we thought it was over. We thought we could put that chapter behind us, like any other gang hit, and move on to the next fresh kill. However, somehow, Metal Matt was resurrected, and killed all our members one by one. Luckily I was at home, but I realized he had gotten to my brother. He had gouged his eyes out. It was horrible.
YOUNG DRAGON D4 arrives to the cathedral, where DRAGON is slowly dying.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: Who did this to you, Dragon?
DRAGON: ...Met-Metal Matt.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: The guy that we killed?
DRAGON: Yes. He's stil-still alive.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: What can I do for you?
DRAGON: Avenge me, little bro. Get him. I don't care how or when, avenge me. Make him pay.
YOUNG DRAGON D4: OK. I will make him pay. I promise, Dragon.
DRAGON D4: For nearly 30 years I have been searching for that maniac. And still no leads. Still, I have you down, so...
DRAGON D4 kills the MAN. DRAGON D4 suddenly gets a phone call.
DRAGON D4: Hello? Yes. Yes I can be in Los Angeles. Wait, Metal Army? What's that? Metal Matt? Yeah... Yeah, I'll be there as soon as possible. Yeah, bye. Finally, revenge at last...
The End.
So this was really cool to write. I still accept suggestions, so if anyone has any ideas they want me to write about, just let me know! I don't have a concrete idea for the next fanfic, but it will involve Metal Matt going into space and going on a killing spree. Thanks for reading!
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This one is a back story for Dragon D4. Thanks for the suggestion, brother. Turns out, Dragon's murderous tendencies started way before his betrayal of the Metal Army...
