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Post by chucky115awesome on Jun 21, 2014 14:56:13 GMT -6
This is going to disregard curse....... It's a bright and sunny day,a young 21 year old Andy is making breakfast with his wife desliva. They have a little boy who is at school. Two hours later,a postcard comes in the mail. It doesn't say who it's from.....it's says,it's been a long time,I'm coming back. Andy confused, asks desliva about it. She has no idea about it. Later on that night,Andy is tossing and turning in his bed. He's having nightmares.in his dream,he sees a 3 foot figure running toward the side of his room. Its only a shadow though. He then hears a evil laugh. The next day Andy is driving to work,he spots a car behind him and in the rear mirror he sees chucky smiling at him. It then disappears. At work Andy's manager comes up to him and asks are you okay? He replies yea,just bad dreams. He then tells Andy to have to rest of the day off. Andy pulls into his garage and hears a scream,all the lights go out in the house...... To be continued
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Post by Spanky on Jun 21, 2014 15:00:11 GMT -6
Not too shabby dude, but it's extremely hard to read because of lack of punctuation and spacing and whatnot. I assume you're posting from your phone.
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Post by chucky115awesome on Jun 21, 2014 15:26:35 GMT -6
Not too shabby dude, but it's extremely hard to read because of lack of punctuation and spacing and whatnot. I assume you're posting from your phone. i went back and edited and tried to space it out better,I hope you can read it better now.I am sorry about that.
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Post by Spanky on Jun 21, 2014 16:18:18 GMT -6
No problem man, it's okay. It's just easier to get into the groove and flow if it's readable. Just take your time with it man, no rush, I'll still be eager to read more.
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Post by chucky115awesome on Jun 21, 2014 17:00:00 GMT -6
Here's Part 2..... The lights turn back on and it's reveals Chucky standing over desliva's dead body.
Andy:You son of a bitch,you killed her!!
Chucky:Why not finish what I started,your dad is dead and I just killed your mother about 5 days ago back in Chicago.I've been waiting to kill you once and for all!
Andy:I knew it,I knew you've come back.Thats why I prepared for it.Now I can be with Mom and Dad once again.I guess we truly will be friends to the end... I've put a atomic bomb under the house just in case you come back and you did.Now you will truly die finally.
Charging forward is Chucky,but before he stops Andy.Andy flips the switch on the wall and blows the house up.Thus causes a huge explosion,taking out two more houses by it.
Emergency and fire trucks rush to the scene followed by the cops.A group of kids come to the scene to watch,but discover a knife on the front lawn covered in blood.
The End
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Post by Spanky on Jun 21, 2014 17:03:36 GMT -6
Dang that took an extreme turn, very interesting though.
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