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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 0:30:16 GMT -6
Here is my 2nd Fan Fic. It will probably be better than the first one.  I will give credit that the most of the first of part one Metal Matt wrote. So, here it goes! Part 1 METAL MATT: You S.O.B. How could you betray us? DRAGON D4: Well, I guess I was always evil. Born evil, really. But the final straw came when you murdered my brother, also named Dragon. That pushed me. Once I figured out it was you who did it, I planned out my revenge. I would join your precious Metal Army, and when the time came, I would show my true colors, and give you a taste of your own medicine. SPANKY: How could you? We trusted you! DRAGON D4: And one more thing. It's time for this Metal Army and this stupid Ribcage Nation to be destroyed once and for all. GEE: You don't talk bad about the Ribcage Nation or the Metal Army! We are stronger than you can imagine. DRAGON D4: Oh yeah? Try me. METAL MATT: Don't worry. I will. METAL MATT grabs a machete and impales DRAGON D4. EVIL METAL MATT: [clapping] Congratulations, Metal Matt! I knew you could do it! I knew you would return to your killing ways! If you want to face me, however, you have to come and find me. As far as the rest of your beautiful army goes, they'll have to deal with my own, more powerful, and more vicious, Metal Army of my own. Freaks, ATTACK! The Evil Metal Army attacks the normal Metal Army, who fight back. While the big war is happening DRAGON is making his way to the hospital nearby unseen. Dragon later arrives at the hospital. He heres a anouncement. ANOUNCEMENT: All citizens may enter and go back to there normal schedule. DRAGON D4: hel....hel... help! NURSE: Oh my! I need some help here! Part 2 comming soon! |
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 12:15:17 GMT -6
Part 2
7 months later...
METAL MATT: You know, we both have been through so many things.
JENNIFER: That's right. We have been laying low for the past month.
CHUCKY: Not something I am use to. What music are you listening to Matt?
METAL MATT: Huh? Oh, weird Al.
CHUCKY: Why did I ask?
TIFFANY: Did yall here the news?
METAL MATT: No. What knews?
TIFFANY: Undeadpunk is in the hospital. Someone shot up his house and he got badly ingured.
METAL MATT: What? Your kidding.
TIFFANY: Sadly, no. I was thinking yall should go see him.
JENNIFER: We should go. What is the time?
METAL MATT: 4:08 a.m.
JENNIFER: I got the keys. Lets go!
METAL MATT and JENNIFER drive to the hospital. Suddenly, the are pulled over by the police.
METAL MATT: What could he want?
COP: License and regerstration.
METAL MATT: I do not have it with me.
COP: Well I am going to have to write you a ticket.
METAL MATT: Oh, here it is!
METAL MATT pulls out a knife. Before METAL MATT stabs him, the cop is shot with a machine gun.
METAL MATT: Who did that?
JENNIFER: That scared the crap out of me.
METAL MATT turns his front lights on. Then they see DRAGON D4
standing there with a gun in his hand.
JENNIFER: Oh my god.
Part 3 comming soon......
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Post by Spanky on Aug 10, 2014 12:22:59 GMT -6
Pretty good man, I am liking it.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 12:55:16 GMT -6
I misspelled a lot of stuff.
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Post by Gee on Aug 10, 2014 16:57:46 GMT -6
No worries man, sometimes I forget how to spell something and have to spell it in like 3 different ways to figure out which one makes the most sense and hope that's how you spell it lol
I like the story so far though, man. Keep it up!
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 18:15:28 GMT -6
Thanks! I wonder if Metal Matt read it. In a side note, I just finished part 3. It is very very very short. But here it is!
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 18:16:44 GMT -6
Part 3
METAL MATT Gets out the car.
DRAGON D4: Long time no see. I am just going to tell you right off. Undeadpunk is most likely going to die. And I locked up the rest of your army in a room. And in 30 minutes, that room will be filled with poison gas in the air. Your army will die. Die in the same place you killed my brother.
METAL MATT: I dont have time to kill you. I have to save my army. And when I do, I am going to find you and kill you.
DRAGON D4: Good luck.
METAL MATT drives off.
JENNIFER: I can not believe this crap is happening. Where are we going?
METAL MATT: The Gassworks.
JENNIFER: I hope there okay.
METAL MATT: We have 25 minutes. He does not realize who he is messing with. He should know me and you are immortal and can not be killed.
JENNIFER: If he knows than why does he try?
METAL MATT: I dont know but I have a feeling we are going to find out soon. Were here!
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Post by Metal Matt on Aug 10, 2014 18:17:28 GMT -6
Have I read it? I might have... Interesting... |
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 20:49:38 GMT -6
Another short part.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 10, 2014 20:52:26 GMT -6
Part 4
METAL MATT: It is across the street.
JENNIFER: Bring your gun.
METAL MATT and JENNIFER arrive at the Gassworks.
JENNIFER: The door is locked.
METAL MATT: The only way is to shoot it open.
Boom!!!
JENNIFER: GEE! SPANKY!.......
METAL MATT: Hold still while I cut the duck tape off you guys.
CHUCKY115AWESOME: Thank god!
THE DOCTOR: What would we do with out yall.
METAL MATT: When someone messes with my army, they mess with me.
JENNIFER: Yeah, Matt and I were...
Suddenly, a loud exsplosion happened.
SPANKY: What was that?
They all go outside to find Dragon d4 with a gang with guns and a big army tank.
DRAGON D4: I hope that car was not a rental.
METAL MATT Oh my.....
Part 5 comming soon.....
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Post by Spanky on Aug 11, 2014 3:11:08 GMT -6
Very interesting, good job so far.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 11, 2014 14:30:44 GMT -6
Thanks, it is gonna be a big fight! |
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 12, 2014 15:53:07 GMT -6
Part 5
DRAGON D4: Well here we are. One side of the road to another.
METAL MATT: So whats the deal here? I am tired of playing around.
DRAGON D4: There are guns I put inside the gassworks just for all of you. You have 10 minutes to come up with a plan. After that the war will start. Your time starts on Brandon's call.
BRANDON: Your time begins now.
METAL MATT: Group meeting behind gassworks.
SPANKY: So whats the plan?
METAL MATT: He has 7 people on his team. So I think we need to get that tank destroyed.
SPANKY: I know how to do that. I seen it on "The Walking Dead".
METAL MATT: Good, what about you Gee?
GEE: I will be yalls cover. On top of the roof.
CHUCKY115AWESOME: Me and THE DOCTOR will do the same as GEE.
METAL MATT: Lets get our wepons and get in our places.
On the other side of the road, DRAGON D4 and his army are talking.
BRANDON: How much longer? I want to dismember someone with my tank.
DRAGON D4: 5 minutes left. Remember, JENNIFER and METAL MATT can not be killed. So only destroy his army. So he can feel the same way I felt when he killed my brother. For taking away all I had left. So are all of you ready? Bob,Rick,J.T,Brandon,Randy,Harry?
DRAGON'S ARMY: Yes sir!
METAL MATT: So we are all ready and good to go. Right?
METAL ARMY: Right!
METAL MATT: Let the war began!
The End is near.......
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Post by Spanky on Aug 12, 2014 16:04:52 GMT -6
Very interesting, looking forward to reading the end.
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Post by Zephyr on Aug 12, 2014 17:03:09 GMT -6
Me to! I could have made this more together than having 6 or 7 parts to it.
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I will give credit that the most of the first of part one Metal Matt wrote. So, here it goes!
